Loved it, very good. Few errors I noticed
Early on there's a stray "ß" at the end of someone's sentence. I forget who I clicked on through
Later on with Anita one line of dialogue suddenly says it's Alice
Maybe a translation error, but the term "fluke" is used, where it should really be the word "bluff".
The ending was very good, there was a scene where it said 'beta ends here' and my heart sank, but it carried on for a good resolution for all involved. Not all that interested in adding more girls, dude's gonna end up with as many girlfriends as days in a month. At least MC complains a bit about lack of foreplay.
Fantastic work, an epic project in fact.